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Paper crane by chachi411 Paper crane by chachi411
Don't ask why the paper crane has a balloon, because I have no clue. I added it in there, because I thought it looks cool that way :D

Hope you like it :heart:

Materials (c) H Pencil
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:iconlalagabrysia:
I definitely appreciate the whimsy in this piece. It also shows that you understand the geometric shapes that make up your still life. My problem with it lies in the technique and overall usage of the picture plane. The drawing distinctly lacks visual interest and it doesn't do your whimsical vision justice at all. It's an easy enough fix: all I think you should do is take further advantage of the grayscale. Use a wider range of values. It will even help show how the rear wing recedes into space. Also, you may want to reconsider how you crop the image. It has a great impact on where the focal point of the drawing is. Anyway, I like what you've done with your idea. The balloon is adorable.
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thecr8tive1 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Student General Artist
Nice!!!
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iDoux Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
if it didnt had a balloon the crane couldnt fly... ;)
nice drawing...
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avguztina Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011
Good job! :iconhappysunshineplz:
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synconi Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011   Artisan Crafter
Really lovely work, the shading makes it look nice and realistic; the balloon's a sweet, whimsy touch. :love:
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chachi411 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks so much. In my drawing class, we were working on drawing "still life" objects and making them look realistic lol :D
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synconi Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011   Artisan Crafter
You're welcome! :)
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Aa-ko Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Thats soo cutee!! I friggin love this. :icontinoplz:
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Xxrosi-chanxX Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011
I like it! And I like your watermark in the corner <3 The balloon is a nice touch.
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chachi411 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much :heart:
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Xxrosi-chanxX Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011
You're welcome <3
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